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writer's block
Contributed by
ming
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Saturday, 21st May 2016 @ 01:36:21 PM in AEST
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you belong in a zoo
squatting in my head
rubbing it in until erased
or to stand empty
with the monkeys
rattling on like a can
rolling down stairs
a bit of a schism
bloody mary b/'/day
cheers.
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ming
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2016-05-21 13:36:21]
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Re: writer's block
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 21st May 2016 @ 02:02:04 PM AEST
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| Yeah you got it alright, but I see no reason why ol/'/ Charlie should ever have writer/'/s block. He just spewed it out how he felt it. Not knocking him, he/'/s one I love to read. |
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Re: writer's block
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by Invierno on
Saturday, 21st May 2016 @ 04:01:48 PM AEST
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so cool....so cool....
Every line is perfect, every word essential to the conveyance.
Masterfully done, as always, Ming.
Invierno
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Re: writer's block
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by softerware on
Sunday, 22nd May 2016 @ 11:59:52 AM AEST
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My favorite line (hard to pick just one) is
rattling on like a can rolling down stairs!
Whatta great line!
Writers block my aunt Tilda--at your worst, you are quite remarkable. Happy birthday ming.
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Re: writer's block
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th May 2016 @ 12:31:40 AM AEST
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charlie legends say
who would like a draw
after getting beat up
say
charlie was a fountain
write
flower, fist, and bestial wail
all one has is not the memories
but who is to say
great write senior Ming!
Peace! |
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