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The flame
Contributed by
softerware
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Monday, 23rd May 2016 @ 06:05:57 PM in AEST
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Loves a chemical reaction;
Like a flame, a changing state.
Consuming with sweet satisfaction;
All who chance to seek her grace.
Warm the fearful, light the dark;
Spiral skyward tiny spark;
Liquify the heart at last;
Leave behind a taste of ash.
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softerware
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Re: The flame
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by ming on
Monday, 23rd May 2016 @ 08:58:23 PM AEST
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I can relate oh-so-much to that last line. /'/Leave behind a taste of ash./'/
ming |
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Re: The flame
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by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 24th May 2016 @ 06:06:56 AM AEST
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Well said Jaye!
I/'/ve acquired a taste for Ash.........
James |
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Re: The flame
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 24th May 2016 @ 08:05:41 PM AEST
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| lovely, hugs n love nessa |
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Re: The flame
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th May 2016 @ 11:54:41 AM AEST
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Love can also be painful and I oh so relate to that last line!
Great poem! |
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Re: The flame
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by unknown_utopia on
Wednesday, 25th May 2016 @ 12:29:22 PM AEST
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yes the taste of ash
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my melting heart,
thanx for sharing. |
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Re: The flame
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by Invierno on
Friday, 27th May 2016 @ 09:03:18 AM AEST
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Wow...this is really cool, Soft. A departure from your style, and I will say I like it very much. I hope you do more like this.
Poetry is like the guitar....there are chords, picking, finger picking, bars, tremelo, etc etc. Each is cool in their own way and require a new method to implement.
You already are master of the universe for your style....now you set out to take on new dimensions, and you storm the gates in force with this accomplishment.
You might say I like this.
Invierno |
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