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The Mirror Of Our Story
Contributed by
LadyCC
on
Monday, 30th May 2016 @ 01:52:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Looking in the mirror of our story, What is it that I will see? Will I see you there forever, Or will it just be me?
Many roads we have travelled, Valleys as well as hills we have crossed. Was the damage too profound, Or is it something that continued to grow beneath the frost?
From the minute I felt you The spark was visible even to others; My soul undeniably just knew I was bound to yours through thorns as well as flowers.
As the years progressed, We both made mistakes as humans often do, And although we drifted apart in pain, My first and last thought everyday was still YOU.
No matter the reasons, no matter the who Looking in the mirror of our story, All I ever want to see is YOU!
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LadyCC
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2016-05-30 01:52:56] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Mirror Of Our Story
(User Rating: 1 ) by hray42 on
Monday, 30th May 2016 @ 02:38:37 AM AEST (User
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OK... Tit for Tat.. A great poem here.. Very much worth the read.. I now see what you mean/meant.. Love, that double edged sword once again.. And your first submission?? You/'/re off to a wonderful start.. A great journey is ahead for you then.. Write, write, write... Take care.. Phil... |
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Re: The Mirror Of Our Story
(User Rating: 1 ) by RussellReinhardt on
Monday, 30th May 2016 @ 08:46:48 AM AEST (User
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Awesome beautiful message of enduring love that just WONT die. God bless love
Greetings
Rus |
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Re: The Mirror Of Our Story
(User Rating: 1 ) by Crys on
Monday, 30th May 2016 @ 10:47:19 AM AEST (User
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Beautiful first attempt! Keep them coming! |
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