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ease the beast
Contributed by
ming
on
Friday, 3rd June 2016 @ 12:51:41 PM in AEST
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abstract
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I heard the blackbird sing
I//'//m constantly constructing
spiderwebs to walk through
I take apart myself
I//'//m inked loosely here
I hear voices and echos
I//'//m a tangle of twigs
I wear an iron key
around my neck
I//'//m a locked cell
I suspect my pen
I//'//m a fence of many stripes
I come and go
as a shadow
I//'//m the charcoal-blue darkness
of a storm coming
I look to absolve my own sins
I//'//m an open grave illusion
I walk alleys for pinecones
I//'//m breathing slower
and deeper
I pet the brute.
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ming
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2016-06-03 12:51:41]
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Re: ease the beast
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd June 2016 @ 01:06:35 PM AEST
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| Hey, I/'/m the most first-person-singular that you/'/d ever meet, but cool it down. To support your poem: /'/Never, ever, ever..pet The Brute. Never ever pet The Brute. You apply words beautifully. |
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Re: ease the beast
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by LadyCC on
Monday, 6th June 2016 @ 02:52:42 PM AEST
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Dear Ming,
Beautiful word imagery!
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