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This Hungry Love
Contributed by
Invierno
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Sunday, 12th June 2016 @ 05:17:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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No sweeter music finds my ears
than your laugh;
no look from anyone before or since my birth
has tugged my heart in such delightful ways.
Your openness and submission of being humbles me
with the trust in us you/'/ve placed.
This hungry love that expands in your presence,
bursting from this dismal sea I/'/ve swam in,
drys the dank life waters in an instant
to bathe in the glow of you.
Until us came to be, I never realized love has plateaus,
levels of depth that ascend to the finest life offers;
coital relations dim in the brilliance of
this love so pure,
the intoxication
renders the world a mocking faded image
of what I now know life can be,
what I feel in your casually bestowed gaze;
World, take all I have, all my everythings that are nothings
that I may glow with, in, and for you all my days.
Copyright ©
Invierno
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2016-06-12 05:17:26]
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Re: This Hungry Love
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th June 2016 @ 10:42:32 AM AEST
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| Splendid, purely splendid. Forgive me if I quietly plagiarise for ulterior motives .Only joking, such cannot be shared other than in words. Hat/'/s off to you. |
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Re: This Hungry Love
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th June 2016 @ 08:20:50 PM AEST
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| Well written - I can truly relate "coital relations dim... yeah that/'/s true. There is far more than that |
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Re: This Hungry Love
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by softerware on
Wednesday, 15th June 2016 @ 10:29:20 PM AEST
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Love on steroids spoken here! You speak your heart with trust your sentiments will find common ground. But one is always loved and one is always the lover; the see saw imbalance that challenges one and satisfies the other. One of life/'/s mysteries, is that both are happy. You describe a lock and key relationship. and the only measuring you do is how well you keep her joy moment to moment in "her casually bestowed gaze."
A complex equation distilled to its essence! Bravo!
softerware
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