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Watching you fall
Contributed by
FireStarter
on
Monday, 20th June 2016 @ 08:20:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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You were high on the cliff watching it all,
while I was down below waiting for you to fall.
Watching and waiting was the hardest for me
pacing, and pacing...impatiently.
You were too close to the edge for my taste,
i shouted at you, and you fell in your haste.
I watched you fall for eternity
I was crying with so much urgency.
You tumbled and fell, hit the rocks
my heart came undone opening the locks.
You made so many mistakes, but I couldn/'/t intervene
you fell down, down...I couldn/'/t see through the sheen.
The mask that you wore on your face,
was held perfectly in place.
I couldn/'/t see the person I loved
even while I watched you fall from above.
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FireStarter
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2016-06-20 20:20:09]
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Re: Watching you fall
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 12th December 2016 @ 10:22:11 AM AEST
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This is awesome! Sitting back and watching is the hardest job of all.
Great job expressing yourself here. Really well done.
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