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SLAP!
Contributed by
pooper
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Saturday, 25th June 2016 @ 01:26:27 PM in AEST
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Slap!
It/'/s irritating them /'/skeeters/'/ things
They don/'/t nary bite nor even sting
But bzzzzz around and hmmm about
Suckin up with that mosquito snout
Smack one here,
smack one there
Scrathin Itchy spots what makes ya swear
How they know to take their feastin
In spots that we find hardest reachin?
Dad blame things, who needs the species,
Eradicate them wee pesky beasties.
Slap!
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Re: SLAP!
(User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on
Saturday, 25th June 2016 @ 03:22:07 PM AEST
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Delightful! Love the local slang, and the sounds of frustration you express that anyone who has ever shared a tent with a mosquito can attest to! Comedy is difficult--comedy in rhyme adds to the challenge. You marched right over both obstacles and left us a giggle!
Thank you!
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Re: SLAP!
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 25th June 2016 @ 08:46:15 PM AEST
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Ah/'/m na awa/'/ tae the heelands this year. Ah/'/ve no recovered frae the bites frae laist year!
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