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Last, Lost, Least, Left out, Looked Over
Contributed by
Beyfoxman5
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Sunday, 26th June 2016 @ 11:22:14 AM in AEST
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Physical skills, maybe You/'/ve had the least at times
Hard to lift a box when you can lift yourself
Feeling lost?
I/'/m So lost that gps has given up on me
Been left out, sure?
But done in such a discrete way that it/'/s hard to take compliments today?
Looked over?
Well, when you/'/ve been least, lost and left out, this seems to be the natural progression
But remember
The less you have, the less you have to weigh you down
When you get lost, maybe you/'/ll go where no one has ever been
And maybe you are not left out, you didn/'/t allow yourself to get sucked in
Looked over? Not by you. Make the best bet-
Yourself
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Beyfoxman5
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2016-06-26 11:22:14]
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Re: Last, Lost, Least, Left out, Looked Over
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by ming on
Sunday, 26th June 2016 @ 03:56:37 PM AEST
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Lovely sentiment.
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Re: Last, Lost, Least, Left out, Looked Over
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by xHeathenx on
Sunday, 26th June 2016 @ 05:40:24 PM AEST
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Thanks señor Foxman!
A strong reminder here too, that that which makes us upset, isn/'/t always necessarily a downfall, or shortcoming.
On top of that, how often has a character in a story been stumbling upon greatness? I/'/ll gladly take being lost to find something later on, like say a beautiful place in nature, or a $20 bill. ;p
-Mark |
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