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The Sun Also Rises
Contributed by
wheels
on
Wednesday, 29th June 2016 @ 08:07:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The forest is dark standing raw and naked before untold fears Shadowed with imagination, hopes and fantasies.
The leaves chuckle unseen In a gathering darkness. One knows they are there waiting the caress that follows the winds hot sticky breath
It was only yesterday under a gentle sun where grew deep rich grass beneath the loving toes of a graceful arch A pirouette turning a perfect timeless ankle upon whim of romance twirling, twirling falling, falling... following the setting sun Arm-in-arm upon a passion stitched quilt of leaves sewn in a golden tearful embrace enveloping us within their dark and dank perfume of forever love.
Breaths exhale before such sighing glory for where it sets it also rises. Sands falling one-by-one like weary boulders that can not help but fall Tugging, trembling at the epic of time clutching with it a shawl of darkness where footsteps part and cease in pairs.
The forest is now black with darkness pitched with fear standing naked before the void while leaves rustle like ghosts whispering "have faith... you know we are here even before the sun rises... And those no longer here shall also rise again born into something new and cherished.
"See! the grass is gone but in its passing seeded tapestries abound and mud... also has its charm the brown, umber, and chocolate ooze squishing between the toes painting arches with childlike smiles of what came before and what shall come again and what lives on within us again and again and those footsteps beside ours again and again.
--wheels--
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2016-06-29 20:07:04] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Sun Also Rises
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 30th June 2016 @ 09:50:24 PM AEST (User
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Wow, pretty damn cool. Great imagery! |
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Re: The Sun Also Rises
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 2nd July 2016 @ 10:38:25 AM AEST (User
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Great imagery, indeed. Reads beautifully, with excellent wording. Bravo! |
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Re: The Sun Also Rises
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Monday, 4th July 2016 @ 11:31:13 AM AEST (User
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so beautiful, love the imagery:)
hugs n love nessa |
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Re: The Sun Also Rises
(User Rating: 1 ) by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 2nd October 2016 @ 11:42:29 PM AEST (User
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You have great flair for writing...Wonderful stuff.
I/'/ll be back to read some more of your work.
~Scorp |
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