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That Man Is There Again
Contributed by
Invierno
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Sunday, 3rd July 2016 @ 08:22:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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That man is there again,
his guitar and fire, steady friends-
chords and crackling conversation;
he never plays a song I know,
words never rob his buddies show.
All the windows he//'//s seen through,
alone, with smiling fingers sing;
wistful looks at him through pains so clear,
as youth in stasis yawned and stirred,
drowning smiles, fighting tears
to join me who/'/s seen but never heard.
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Invierno
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2016-07-03 20:22:52]
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Re: That Man Is There Again
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by wheels on
Monday, 4th July 2016 @ 08:10:08 AM AEST
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| a Cool write kinda sad |
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Re: That Man Is There Again
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 4th July 2016 @ 11:46:16 PM AEST
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"he never plays a song I know,
words never rob his buddies show.
All the windows he//'//s seen through,
alone, with smiling fingers sing;"
Yes. Smiling fingers sing. Beautiful imagery. I love when senses experience beyond their capacity. Like eyes smiling and the like |
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Re: That Man Is There Again
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by xHeathenx on
Tuesday, 5th July 2016 @ 09:26:37 PM AEST
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It/'/s arguably as beautiful and phantasmic in description here, as it is to the soul in life, as well as it is, a written existential painting if you will.(which chances are you won/'/t because you had- ha!
I/'/m impressed more so after reading this, as a pleasant after taste from a smokey lozenge, that has a mild flavor, but the aftertaste is like a dinner, or even dessert. :) |
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Re: That Man Is There Again
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by ming on
Wednesday, 6th July 2016 @ 08:44:12 PM AEST
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Good write. Bittersweet vibe.
ming |
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Re: That Man Is There Again
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 7th July 2016 @ 08:26:00 PM AEST
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enchanting write
I thought, " wistful looks at him through pains (pangs that might show through) so clear"...
to join the resolute by all the surrounding clues/ somewhere inside --- I wonder not letting loose,
the reclusive style - wistful/dim, perhaps solemness
maybe slumber/ the long conditioned slumber like the edge of a cascading turbulent water/ perhaps an eddy
this really captivated my thought/ like a painting in nature brings with it all the 5 senses creating the sixth.
Thanks Invierno!
Peace! |
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Re: That Man Is There Again
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 12th July 2016 @ 09:57:21 PM AEST
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| A sadness reigns in this peice |
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