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Where My Spirit Carries Me
Contributed by
xHeathenx
on
Sunday, 21st August 2016 @ 05:58:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Where fact becomes fiction And fiction becomes fact; Illusions/'/ fangs ready- Poised to attack;
Where my spirit carries me
Where sinners become saints And saints become angels; Angels become demons And demons become idols;
Where my spirit carries me
Where cloud becomes droplet Finds respite in expansive sea; Where earth dirt and rock Scaffold al/'/gether in harmony;
Where my spirit carries me
Where beast becomes harlot And harlot becomes nun; Where winds become presses Pushing us children to run;
Where my spirit carries me
Where the number of the beast Is feared by the beast of number; Where triumphs are found And giants in slumber;
Where my spirit carries me
Where the moon pulls the ocean And ocean covers land; Where mountains high and tall Are proud blades of sand;
Where my spirit carries me
Where art melds with beauty And beauty with heart; Where tears fall victim To motion in part;
Where my spirit carries me
Where adventure is stoked And experience is learned; Where hearts are broke And blessings are earned;
Where my spirit carries me
Where you find joy You can also find pain; So don/'/t dare stop At sight of a some rain;
Where our spirit carries we;
Throughout our life Is struggle and trial; Riddles, broke bones, And half-false wry smiles;
We will know anguish, Misery, and pain; But we must shine on, Forge through the rain;
Where our spirit carries we;
Where through our glory, And losses look/'/t so grim; We will travel on yet more- We will choose to live!;
Where climbs/'/ and falls/'/ Endings are most extreme; We *will* know our bottom, As well our highest peak;
Where at both junctures, I leave a request to be:
"Go where your spirit carries ye."
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xHeathenx
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Re: Where My Spirit Carries Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Tiny_Tina on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2016 @ 04:58:26 AM AEST (User
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Great read!
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Re: Where My Spirit Carries Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by RussellReinhardt on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2016 @ 09:19:13 AM AEST (User
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This is a good write I like it.
Greetings
Rus |
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Re: Where My Spirit Carries Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2016 @ 07:33:49 PM AEST (User
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You have given us an incantation to live by!
We do not change--only the things around us grow up and away.
A lovely reminder to move forward, however slowly,
always.
A song of freedom and the courage to pursue it.
And so well sung.
softerware |
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Re: Where My Spirit Carries Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Saturday, 27th August 2016 @ 08:04:46 AM AEST (User
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I/'/m with Jaye on this one Heathen...
Well done and a sing song poem.
Great write!
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Re: Where My Spirit Carries Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 27th August 2016 @ 11:24:49 PM AEST (User
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I really enjoyed reading this flow. |
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Re: Where My Spirit Carries Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 5th December 2016 @ 09:50:59 AM AEST (User
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Wow!!! I am so glad I clicked on this poem (that I assumed I must/'/ve commented on).
This truly moved me. This may be your most exceptional piece yet. Well written, beautiful language and message. Stunning write all around, Mark!
I love how you switched it up halfway through.
I hope more people discover this gem. I/'/ll be back for sure.
~Scorp |
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