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tugged at edges
Contributed by
ming
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Sunday, 21st August 2016 @ 09:08:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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the muggy silence
monstrous thing
sweat wet heat
soil wedged
under nails
even surrounded
by a thousand plus
city bricks
head full of flowers
turning dirt
for hours
meditating
this good land
this good rain
(come to me)
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ming
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2016-08-21 21:08:41]
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Re: tugged at edges
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by xHeathenx on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2016 @ 10:28:58 AM AEST
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| This makes me think of a person digging and planting a garden, with a wreath of flowers around their head, black dirt under their nails, smile on their face, red bricks around them making an enclosure in a residential area, perhaps in a city during an industrial revolution time period. :) |
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Re: tugged at edges
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by softerware on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2016 @ 07:29:11 PM AEST
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Even in canyons of concrete, there is hope..nature springing up between the cracks to flash us with a bright yellow daffodil.
All we have to do is a bit of digging, to find in life what we most want is lying just below the surface.
A wonderful poem of unyielding hope.
Beautiful and inspiring.
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Re: tugged at edges
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by duff on
Wednesday, 24th August 2016 @ 07:39:48 AM AEST
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It/'/s been awhile my friend so it makes me smile to read this. Boasting of color like only your imagination can. Always a pleasure.
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Re: tugged at edges
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by Invierno on
Thursday, 25th August 2016 @ 10:31:25 PM AEST
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Beautiful and moving, as always, Ming.
I marvel at your talent.
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Re: tugged at edges
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by Spike on
Sunday, 4th September 2016 @ 04:59:27 AM AEST
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lovely.
S |
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Re: tugged at edges
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 16th September 2016 @ 08:20:27 AM AEST
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Pardon the pun, but I dig it! Hehehe.
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