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Recess
Contributed by
duff
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Tuesday, 23rd August 2016 @ 08:58:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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We/'/re so proud of your eyes and that smile
Kneeling shine down that sunny dark style
Our laces dressed your glass without a tie
Jumping up and down years seeking a kite
We/'/ve got you on technology you/'/re saved
The cement sticks and you/'/re just a name
So you sing now it/'/s over so we exchange
God bless summer for the clouds and rain
Such a strange notion to abandon the land
Too many hearts break for you falling flat
You can save us all but when you ran away
Tomorrow became the exception to play
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duff
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2016-08-23 20:58:27]
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Re: Recess
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by xHeathenx on
Wednesday, 24th August 2016 @ 03:53:12 AM AEST
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I think I was lost on this one. It looked like a picture was being painted on a sort of track, and then it was lost- and by track of course I mean from this reader/'/s perspective.
It has almost a type of sinister feeling, like picturing young girls hop-skotching when they become chalk outlines; then some disturbed and deranged child buries one of their former classmates in pavement like the Rammstein song "Stein um Stein". |
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Re: Recess
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by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 30th August 2016 @ 10:44:00 AM AEST
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I liked this poem. You can read many things into it the more you read it. Both dark and no so dark.
Very interesting!
James |
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