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Never
Contributed by
Northernlights
on
Wednesday, 24th August 2016 @ 05:37:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Pointless is the journey to find What has already been found? I have found love, been in love, known love So why look again? Looking creates an endless trail of ashes Rubbed into lashes and I blink with the Futility of looking to find the glimmer of a diamond Finding an empty sneering chasm of unconnected Endless searching, and I am tired! Tired of life/'/s truth, Tired of what I see and know, for I know Love and Anything less will never begin to Feed this heart, a broken wing, I cannot Fly Though life breathes, Tears flow and this will not mend, for my penance Is to that sacred ground never to be returned.
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Northernlights
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2016-08-24 17:37:42] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Never
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Saturday, 27th August 2016 @ 08:00:14 AM AEST (User
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A beautiful poem full of wisdom.
As you get older what/'/s the use of chasing frustration? Well written. I enjoyed this.
James |
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Re: Never
(User Rating: 1 ) by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 27th August 2016 @ 11:18:17 PM AEST (User
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In my experience the chase is always better than catch.... |
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Re: Never
(User Rating: 1 ) by xHeathenx on
Thursday, 1st September 2016 @ 07:51:17 AM AEST (User
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Pointless, but not meaningless, nor, even better yet, worthless! :D
My favorite part was in regards to the broken wing. :)
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Re: Never
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Monday, 5th September 2016 @ 09:10:40 PM AEST (User
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lovely, hugs n love nessa |
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Re: Never
(User Rating: 1 ) by duff on
Tuesday, 6th September 2016 @ 08:12:14 PM AEST (User
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The tiring chase. The time and effort. The questions and doubt that creep in why is it not happening. I found love before. Why not again? A write raw and true. Well done my friend. Always a pleasure |
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Re: Never
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd May 2017 @ 07:52:45 PM AEST (User
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Maybe you will just stumble upon it someday. I do know these feelings, though, all too well.
Awesome poem! |
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