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Paternal Whiplash
Contributed by
Invierno
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Sunday, 28th August 2016 @ 06:36:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Nor frown nor smile lips slack air dismissed,
new lines map his face of careful architect;
eyes in tango fix upon his son,
comprehension steps forth in beated firm command,
once steel convictions stumble, wrecked, left the floor;
hail! the same new partner gained!;
mind and heart not rushing, dragging, tempo met,
regret swept from eyes to smile, dawned lips upward crept.
His son never wanted to be good;
competent to skin, brass and wood;
at last his father met his dawn,
blessed, not a moment late,
His son/'/s soul would never rest for less
than to be one of
The Greats.
A scene from the clip on YT, 2 min 04 sec https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=twKsU1Qv4k8
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Invierno
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2016-08-28 06:36:08]
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Re: Paternal Whiplash
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by RussellReinhardt on
Friday, 23rd September 2016 @ 04:00:43 AM AEST
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Hello my brother
Took a while to take this one in. I think I got it right now.
Yes a fathers joy is his children and more importantly a boy because he wants to know that boy grows up to be a good man the best he can be for himself. Nice one Mike. God bless
Greetings
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