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Cotton Candy
Contributed by
Invierno
on
Tuesday, 30th August 2016 @ 06:23:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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Have a cup of murder, Mister?
Best in these here parts!
Laughing, several people took to him,
George, you know our murder/'/s won first place
every year since 1910!
Another,
Really George, it/'/s true,
your murder ain/'/t half bad,
but only a foreigner
wouldn/'/t know you must be mad!
Chuckling, cups of murder swilled in every hand,
from George and I they strolled,
in mirth, in this insane land.
My mind snapped upon a twig of reason
no more firm;
children/'/s laughter tween gulps of murder
drowned elders murdered sips.
I grabbed a stick and crowned George upon his head,
smile gone to fear, I beat him until dead.
You like murder? How is mine?!
You/'/re all crazy here, you, you.
Seize that man!,
and seized I was, when above the tumult,
Oh, no! Geooorge!
a tortured woman/'/s scream ripped and rang.
Mister, we don/'/t cotton here to candy,
in 5 minutes you/'/ll be hanged.
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Invierno
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2016-08-30 06:23:43]
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Re: Cotton Candy
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by unknown_utopia on
Friday, 9th September 2016 @ 12:52:22 AM AEST
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good flow
do not know why I giggled at the ending.... |
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Re: Cotton Candy
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by duff on
Thursday, 22nd September 2016 @ 01:53:51 PM AEST
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| A very original and creative piece of writing. I also feel titles can be lost on the reader but this one was not by any means. Great job |
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