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bleeding alone
Contributed by
FireStarter
on
Saturday, 3rd September 2016 @ 05:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Bleeding in silence
bleeding in pain,
Nothing in this world
will stop this endless stain
Bleeding out
No one near
No one...
around
Will see my last tear
As I lay dying
in this mess of mine,
Didn/'/t even consider
the ultimate crime
The price I will pay
for slashing my wrists,
For tearing my heart
and soul to bits
Bleeding out with
no one near...
No one will see
my last dying tear
Copyright ©
FireStarter
... [
2016-09-03 17:00:00]
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Re: bleeding alone
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by JamesStockdale on
Saturday, 3rd September 2016 @ 09:53:37 PM AEST
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Great write. I hope it/'/s only a poem.
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Re: bleeding alone
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by softerware on
Sunday, 4th September 2016 @ 01:30:27 PM AEST
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Your eloquent muse is fond of tragedy of late.
She is in a dark place, expunging your pain, and so it should be. Better to write of desolation than to succumb.
No reader exists who cannot identify with your write, so you join hands with us in our darkest moments, and it serves to remind us that the sun will rise again, with or without our permission and in disregard of our desire.
We all face a blank page every day.
The best we can do is fill our canvas, and choose our colors wisely.
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Re: bleeding alone
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th September 2016 @ 01:41:16 AM AEST
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| Very sad. :( |
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Re: bleeding alone
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by duff on
Tuesday, 6th September 2016 @ 07:21:12 AM AEST
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| Well written yet gut wrenching. |
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