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Once you received THAT call...
Contributed by
LadyCC
on
Monday, 5th September 2016 @ 01:36:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I see you in my every second, yet -
I cannot touch you.
You are looking, yet -
It seems you are looking through me.
I hear you, yet -
You are inaudible.
With you always here, yet -
A whole existence away.
A
Decade
Of
Being
Lost...
No water, yet -
Drowning in silence.
No shade, yet -
Lost in a forest of sorrow.
Always on the go in a busy day, yet -
Frozen in that one moment in time.
Running a million miles per minute, yet -
Not going anywhere else but "Memoryville".
Why did you have to die and leave me empty?
Without
You
I
Feel
So
Lost...
Copyright ©
LadyCC
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2016-09-05 13:36:49]
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Re: Once you received THAT call...
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 5th September 2016 @ 03:46:28 PM AEST
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truth. beautifully penned, excellent imagery,
hugs n love nessa |
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Re: Once you received THAT call...
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by duff on
Tuesday, 6th September 2016 @ 07:18:48 AM AEST
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| Emotionally beautiful wrapped in a delicate and vulnerable sadness. Very raw without shelter. Well done. |
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Re: Once you received THAT call...
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by RussellReinhardt on
Thursday, 8th September 2016 @ 07:49:23 AM AEST
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Dear LadyCC
All I can do is.......
No there is nothing I can do.
I know your sorrow and pain.
I know, no matter what anyone does.
It never subsidies no matter what.
However I/'/m here for you.
God bless and beautiful piece you have here.
Greetings
Rus xXxFMxXx |
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Re: Once you received THAT call...
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 7th October 2016 @ 04:51:54 PM AEST
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I can/'/t begin to understand just how intense that loss must feel.
Must be like having a knife stuck into your heart. At least in some way we can partly share your feelings through your words.
However, I know that what you went through and are still going through can never really be fully expressed.
Steve |
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Re: Once you received THAT call...
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by angelus8663 on
Friday, 21st May 2021 @ 08:21:00 AM AEST
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I recently lost my dad to cancer and I recieved that call
you portray the emotions and attempt to deal with the pain and also live life really well
well done |
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