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Cupid Burning
Contributed by
duff
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Saturday, 10th September 2016 @ 01:59:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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In hearts lie our assassin
Quiet bow and arrow tart
Ready to fire upon caress
Stifle red to ride in ashes
Mascara her river running
The lips touch hurt and die
Roses abandoned by water
A mirror breaking his hand
Hotel key on the dark side
Chocolate cards melting
The angel without dinner
Served by another knife
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duff
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2016-09-10 13:59:15]
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Re: Cupid Burning
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by softerware on
Sunday, 11th September 2016 @ 10:56:31 AM AEST
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Your imagery is so acute that it leads us along the tale like the pages of a book in the wind! Quick, crisp, and vivid snapshots in staccato, inviting readers to add the background colors.
A most interesting style you have left for us here!
A tale you conspire to write with those who read it.
Enjoyable, and hard to resist!
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Re: Cupid Burning
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by ammar on
Tuesday, 13th September 2016 @ 03:39:11 PM AEST
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| This is a very enjoyable piece. It is rich in imagery and leaves the reader pondering over what/'/s been written. |
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Re: Cupid Burning
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 14th September 2016 @ 02:34:26 PM AEST
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Woah. Dark and delicious. I like this a lot!
Well done on the visuals. Great job capturing the mood. Keep it up!
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Re: Cupid Burning
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by ming on
Wednesday, 21st September 2016 @ 11:10:25 AM AEST
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You are becoming my favorite. "a mirror breaking his hand" genius!
And not to make less of "Mascara her river running"
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