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Gentle
Contributed by
softerware
on
Sunday, 11th September 2016 @ 08:03:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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He marched onto the wooded glade;
lance and sword in hand;
Ready for a battle;
Fearless, in command.
Sunset came with none to tame;
No creatures crossed his sights;
Although he stayed another day;
and hunted through the night.
Home he rode defeated;
Flung wide his cottage door;
His daughter sat surrounded;
With creatures on the floor.
Scattered at his presence;
Terror in thier hearts;
Absent soothing essence;
swiftly did depart.
If you would gather creatures;
Abandon victory;
Sit peaceful in the stillness;
And they will come to thee.
Copyright ©
softerware
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2016-09-11 20:03:24]
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Re: Gentle
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by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 11th September 2016 @ 08:38:18 PM AEST
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made me think......good flow,
but it is hard to abandon victory at times.... |
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Re: Gentle
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by RussellReinhardt on
Monday, 12th September 2016 @ 05:11:55 AM AEST
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Dear Soft
The moment I was done reading this two names came to mind. Gandhi and Mandela, I/'/m sure they aren/'/t the only two men that had peaceful ways but they are my frame of reference, you piece is beautiful and rings true in more ways than one, I myself was without my Queen for four years as you well know, and this separation was dew to my own in ability to resolve things peacefully. I/'/ve learned that the camp humble and peaceful way heelds much better results. Beautiful write thanks for shearing. God bless
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Re: Gentle
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by JamesStockdale on
Monday, 12th September 2016 @ 06:13:14 AM AEST
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Lovely indeed Jaye
Had a great flow as well.
James |
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