|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
To Many Words
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Sunday, 11th September 2016 @ 08:34:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
|
Its not that I do not want to
I really want to
it just that I gotta resist it,
I keep
falling
for the things that you do
and it seems like you do not care.
I keep hearing
about all the good times
and the empty promises
keeping hope alive,
gonna leave
watch me as I walk away
but
I am going no where.
its not hard to turn away
but it never last
because I
keep coming back here,
I keep hoping that things are gonna change
it never does
and the pain gets harder to bear.
Flesh by the pound is what I pay
everyday I peel away the skin
it is so Insane,
there seems to be
nothing here for me
and I am starting not to care.
Fractured resistance
helps me keep my distance
as I try to slip through the cracks
and disappear,
reading from the book
of thee importance of nothing
it revealed
that no one really cares.
I keep hearing about the good times
well when did it happen
and where was i when I missed mine,
trying to use words
to try and get through
but
it gets me no where.
Copyright ©
unknown_utopia
... [
2016-09-11 20:34:26]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: To Many Words
(User Rating: 1 )
by duff on
Monday, 12th September 2016 @ 08:36:38 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| The allowance of hope and expectations sometimes can show its brutal side when failing to deliver. Yearning for a different course. Dropping our guard to be shown the way. Vulnerable and exposed only to be left out once again. I enjoyed the honesty in this. Well done |
|
|
Re: To Many Words
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th September 2016 @ 10:18:45 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
To many words, this title caught my fancy.
Like you were writing a letter addressed to many words, all kinds, too many to address in one single letter.
But then I read your poetry
And it entailed pain possibly on a personal
accord.
people care and you are not alone, I hope you
understand, although such things certainly can
be difficult to feel and truly believe
the bad times for me were the good times
I sometimes see
I know that makes no sense, but it/'/s true in my case.
the bad times where I didn/'/t have much
and struggled and felt distraught
were the good times/ almost like a Dickens novel
you just need an orbit and just one angel or real
life person by your side.
just one.
I read that somewhere.
Unknown Utopia you will find your groove.
Keep writing man, I like it!
Peace!
|
|
|
Re: To Many Words
(User Rating: 1 )
by ammar on
Friday, 16th September 2016 @ 03:14:30 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Your tone and words really engage the readers. Made me want to read this again and again. Keep writing. |
|
|
Re: To Many Words
(User Rating: 1 )
by ming on
Sunday, 18th September 2016 @ 02:00:57 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This was like watching/reading someone bleed close to death with ink. Moving in the raw intent.
ming |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Site Help
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
