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Ponder The Days Of Night
Contributed by
JamesStockdale
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Thursday, 15th September 2016 @ 12:22:49 PM in AEST
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While I sit and dream
Ponder the days of night
So scared, full of fright
To move on, take flight
My mind wonders
To where it next
Will wander
Hidden away are dreams
Of a new day
Walk in the rain
To wash my troubles away
A life to be relived and renewed
Void of pain and strife
A life measured
As just right
Copyright ©
JamesStockdale
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2016-09-15 12:22:49]
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Re: Ponder The Days Of Night
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by unknown_utopia on
Thursday, 15th September 2016 @ 08:39:38 PM AEST
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Moving on to the next adventure is always exciting
we can only hope it/'/s pleasure is consuming..... |
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Re: Ponder The Days Of Night
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th September 2016 @ 10:00:27 PM AEST
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oh yes, me too!
I would see people doing more
with much less than myself
One does not need too look to far
to see a beauty beyond and
a struggle worth
within one is one within one more
embrace of comfort/ struggle/
dream/ words like seconds
7:57:59
walk in the rain -
enjoyed this one James!
Peace!
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Re: Ponder The Days Of Night
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th September 2016 @ 10:01:42 PM AEST
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oh yes, me too!
I would see people doing more
with much less than myself
One does not need to look too far
to see a beauty beyond and
a struggle worth
within one is one within one more
embrace of comfort/ struggle/
dream/ words like seconds
7:57:59
walk in the rain -
enjoyed this one James!
Peace!
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Re: Ponder The Days Of Night
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by duff on
Thursday, 22nd September 2016 @ 01:30:36 PM AEST
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| It/'/s always quite interesting how one minute your mind is racing with fear or joy and then the next thing you know the slate is wiped clean and its a new day. There is mystery and intrigue throughout your words. Lines that make the mind walk a journey. Well done |
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Re: Ponder The Days Of Night
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 22nd December 2016 @ 10:42:36 AM AEST
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Well this gave me a smile! I think this poem was measured just right. It comes across as uplifting, with the purpose of forward motion...
A personal motivator, it would seem. Well done!
~Scorp |
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Re: Ponder The Days Of Night
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 5th September 2020 @ 10:56:10 AM AEST
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//// Fine!!! I`m supposed to follow the Scorpendous One`s comment?
Fine, I`ll just say, woo-hoo!!! Brilliant!!! Love it.
Me
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