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Vapor
Contributed by
duff
on
Saturday, 17th September 2016 @ 11:30:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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It/'/s Monday/'/s lunchbox and the
Porn browser lacks excitement
In a cubicle that I can/'/t breathe
My desk hides a lonely orange
Next to yellow sheet continuum
Grey carpet I am still watching
Styrofoam coffee stir the abyss
The phone is a red light district
Flashing before eyes and hand
Unfinished fornicating figures
Stairwell stepping into access
Oxford hangman finish the job
Tomorrow starts all over and its
Another day to file under kill me
Copyright ©
duff
... [
2016-09-17 11:30:55]
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Re: Vapor
(User Rating: 1 )
by ming on
Sunday, 18th September 2016 @ 01:51:54 AM AEST
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So deliciously gloomy. My fav line, /'/Styrofoam coffee stirs the abyss/'/ and the colors, /'/lonely orange, yellow sheet, grey carpet, red light district/'/ brings it into sharp relief.
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