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twice removed
Contributed by
ming
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Saturday, 17th September 2016 @ 11:16:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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sign of a sign
in myself
a whole
congress
but not
my third
I /she/'/s out
slumming
as the four
chambers
keep the beat
or can we bear
to hear it
in throes
not just theory
as a fist could
vindicate
the pause
stutter-start
the clenched
empty
kill
the
poem.
Copyright ©
ming
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2016-09-17 23:16:36]
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Re: twice removed
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by duff on
Wednesday, 21st September 2016 @ 10:27:33 AM AEST
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| You/'/ve got some great lines here full of intrigue. Lines that paint a scene for the brain to feast on. It/'/s fun to come back and read a poem a second time and get a brand new perspective. Well done |
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Re: twice removed
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by Invierno on
Thursday, 22nd September 2016 @ 04:17:12 PM AEST
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| subtlety itself. |
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