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This Little Fly....
Contributed by
RussellReinhardt
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Saturday, 24th September 2016 @ 12:59:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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24-09-2016....
How terrifying life can be sometimes,
Ahead of us lies fields of mines.
The daunting task sends frosty chills down your spine!
How we wish we could just hide,
For pushing on may dent our pride,
And from that we can not hide.
Life demands action on your part,
For this challenge life has placed on your path.
But dont try too hard - just be smart
And hide like this little fly -
Who couldnt brave the sky,
For he knew he would surely die!
RR
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RussellReinhardt
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2016-09-24 12:59:26]
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Re: This Little Fly....
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Saturday, 24th September 2016 @ 05:55:57 PM AEST
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In life we must face of changellers
no mater how hard it may seem,hiding only prolong
it,your poem is nice and excellently written.like it a lot |
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Re: This Little Fly....
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by JamesStockdale on
Sunday, 25th September 2016 @ 12:48:29 PM AEST
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Wonderful poem.
It can be a very cruel world!
James |
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Re: This Little Fly....
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by duff on
Monday, 26th September 2016 @ 01:09:18 PM AEST
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| Time to reflect on our troubles can be a relief. It can open other doors. Especially with writing. Strength after pain. I enjoyed this. Well done |
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Re: This Little Fly....
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 27th September 2016 @ 10:31:00 PM AEST
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Just have to remember
how to escape the prisons we create,
life is a crewel lye..... |
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Re: This Little Fly....
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 1st October 2016 @ 11:35:28 AM AEST
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//There/'/s nowhere to run to ba-bay
There/'/s nowhere to hide!//
Your poem made me think of an old song (lyrics above). Thank you for that!
P.s "For pushing on may dent our pride".
Great line.
~Scorp |
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Re: This Little Fly....
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by softerware on
Monday, 3rd October 2016 @ 11:01:31 PM AEST
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This is utterly enjoyable! A modern fairy tale to live by!
Run, hide, but never give up!
The photo is perfect! The rhyme, smooth as silk.
I do so love when you pontificate! You do it so well!
softerware |
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Re: This Little Fly....
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by alicewhite on
Friday, 21st April 2017 @ 02:55:23 PM AEST
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| I needed to read this x brilliant |
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