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Post Traumatic Stress Syndrome
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Friday, 30th September 2016 @ 01:31:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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//I am.//
Rabid dog unleashed
Pure terror unsheathed
Continuous playback
On a fragmented reel,
On an uneven keel
//I am.//
Confidence shattered
Fight or flight scattered
Violently seized again
Overcome with thoughts of fear
Triggered by Yesteryear
//I am.//
Retching from remorse
Old nightmares enforced
Losing battles again
Still too young and too scared
My psyche ill-prepared
//I am.//
Exhausted. Sleepless.
Permanent bleakness
Anxious, yet vigilant
You will never be free
//I am P.T.S.D.//
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2016-09-30 13:31:03]
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Re: Post Traumatic Stress Syndrome
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by duff on
Friday, 30th September 2016 @ 04:13:26 PM AEST
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| Highly imaginative the way you captured the internal madness one can feel in their moments of chaos. Descriptive, bold and raw in your face writing. Great job |
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Re: Post Traumatic Stress Syndrome
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by JamesStockdale on
Friday, 30th September 2016 @ 06:26:10 PM AEST
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I can sympathize with this mindset as I/'/m coming out of this myself. You recognize it and that/'/s the most important step at getting past it. This was a great poem however it also reflects sadness and anxiety but it is a honest write as well as a poem that can comfort others going through similar issues in their lives.
Brilliant poem.
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Re: Post Traumatic Stress Syndrome
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 3rd October 2016 @ 11:43:47 PM AEST
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| you captured that P.T.S.D feeling completely. |
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Re: Post Traumatic Stress Syndrome
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 4th October 2016 @ 10:07:42 PM AEST
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You captured this perfectly I relate, sorry you are going through this it is hard.
Love ya chicky
Michelle |
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Re: Post Traumatic Stress Syndrome
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th October 2016 @ 08:05:42 AM AEST
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Except for the young reference, I feel I could have written something similar. Obviously not in your unique Scorperiffic style though.
*inserts clapping emote here*
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Re: Post Traumatic Stress Syndrome
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 7th October 2016 @ 05:18:45 PM AEST
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I can only admire your resilience and fortitude and applaud from the sidelines.
To say I know what you are going through would be a lie, to say I understand a little more about what you are going through would be fair......having been given the insight here.
Keep strong
Steve |
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