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The lady on center stage
Contributed by
FireStarter
on
Friday, 30th September 2016 @ 11:10:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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The lady on center stage
walkin/'/ the streets is her life
Inside her mind a battle will rage
while bleeding unforgiving strife
Walkin/'/ the streets is her life
through the rain, and sun when it shines,
While bleeding unforgiving strife,
I know she can never once be mine
Through the rain, and sun when it shines,
each day has a new beginning
I know she can never once be mine,
although, I/'/ll hold out hope; grinning.
Each day has a new beginning
inside her mind a battle will rage,
Although, I/'/ll hold out hope; grinning
the lady on center stage...
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FireStarter
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2016-09-30 23:10:26]
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Re: The lady on center stage
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 1st October 2016 @ 10:39:34 AM AEST
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I like how you challenged yourself not only with rhyme scheme, but with repeated words.
Nicely done!
~Scorp |
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Re: The lady on center stage
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by duff on
Saturday, 1st October 2016 @ 11:43:01 AM AEST
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| Intricate, mysterious and full of hope. Longing for that person when they may or may not have a clue of our emotions. I liked the imagery as well. Well done |
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Re: The lady on center stage
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by JamesStockdale on
Monday, 3rd October 2016 @ 09:44:04 AM AEST
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The other commenters summed it up nicely.
Great poem.
James |
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