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Tennis, Anyone
Contributed by
norm
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Sunday, 1st June 2003 @ 01:05:00 PM in AEST
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If I could train a tennis ball
to jump upon a tennis wall,
return to me upon a call,
If I could train the ball.
I'd lend my service far and wide,
And place a ball so deep inside,
a case that's brief and in my stride
I'd teach with selfless pride.
Everyone could play the ball
like Ivan Lendl, man so tall
or maybe like my nephew, Saul,
If I could train the ball.
From what I know about the game,
Advantage 'In' would be the same,
Advantage 'Out" might take the blame,
If I could teach the game.
If I could train a tennis ball,
I'd give it to miss Arlene Dahl,
The movies then would profit all,
If I could train the ball.
Tennis wall, return on call.
Deep inside, in my stride.
Man so tall, nephew, Saul
Ad 'In' same, ad 'Out' blame.
Arlene Dahl, profit all.
If I could train the ball.
Copyright ©
norm
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Re: Tennis, Anyone
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 1st June 2003 @ 02:24:39 PM AEST
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| it would be nice if things like that would happen! what an imagination norm! great poem:) ~hugs nessa |
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Re: Tennis, Anyone
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 1st June 2003 @ 03:08:44 PM AEST
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good one
Shari |
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Re: Tennis, Anyone
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Monday, 2nd June 2003 @ 03:54:21 AM AEST
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| not much into tennis myself, but this was a good poem to read. |
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Re: Tennis, Anyone
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by destinysseduction on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 04:18:21 PM AEST
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fun, plucky poem written with much imagination. loved this!
destinysseduction
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Re: Tennis, Anyone
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by Leviticus on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 08:10:41 PM AEST
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| Nice poem. I loved the ryming. Good Read. |
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Re: Tennis, Anyone
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by bethie on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 05:13:55 PM AEST
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| amusing , snappy poem with humor to boot. |
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Re: Tennis, Anyone
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by inoc on
Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 05:28:42 AM AEST
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If I could train a tennis ball,
I'd make it bigger not too small,
.....then maybe then.... I might be able to hit it???!!
lovely poem...
cheers!~ |
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Re: Tennis, Anyone
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by Jane_Doe on
Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 05:46:31 AM AEST
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| Cute and funny poem! i liked it! |
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Re: Tennis, Anyone
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by slogan on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 11:14:09 AM AEST
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| great write...jh |
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Re: Tennis, Anyone
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by candysears on
Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 08:04:46 PM AEST
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This is beautiful...The perfect write!
God Bless! |
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Re: Tennis, Anyone
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by detourchick on
Monday, 16th April 2007 @ 03:09:38 AM AEST
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| rockin write |
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Re: Tennis, Anyone
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Re: Tennis, Anyone
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by Ambivalence on
Sunday, 29th November 2009 @ 08:04:06 PM AEST
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CREATIVE!!!
now you've convinced me to take tennis next semester haha
well done!
take care
-K.Z. |
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