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Time to rest
Contributed by
banjosandwitch
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Tuesday, 18th October 2016 @ 03:08:45 PM in AEST
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Time to rest
One has to die one day So make the loved ones you leave behind Think of you and the good times you shared Let them smile when your name comes up in conversation Because you touched our heart and made us feel blessed Everyone has to die some day Today you can rest
By banjosandwitch 18/10/16
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2016-10-18 15:08:45] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Time to rest
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 18th October 2016 @ 10:41:13 PM AEST (User
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Very nice poem indeed. You know if you/'/re bad news even more people remember you. lol
But your way is the better way.
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Re: Time to rest
(User Rating: 1 ) by unknown_utopia on
Friday, 21st October 2016 @ 03:47:03 PM AEST (User
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good poem
made me smile
for a little while.... |
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Re: Time to rest
(User Rating: 1 ) by mvvenkataraman on
Sunday, 30th October 2016 @ 03:42:08 AM AEST (User
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This type of poem cleanses our mind
It rectifies our bad behavior superbly
It sets right even if we think wrongly
I am now corrected by this lovely one
Colossal meaning it carries surely
Great ideas and great enlightenment.
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Re: Time to rest
(User Rating: 1 ) by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Tuesday, 20th December 2016 @ 02:00:22 PM AEST (User
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Reminds me that when we pass we all leave something for the world to remember us by.
I hope when I do the will be happy memories.
Nice work
Steve |
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