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Just Today
Contributed by
JamesStockdale
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Thursday, 20th October 2016 @ 08:51:45 AM in AEST
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They put a stone on his grave
Just today
For all to see
Dear God I pray
I hope he knows he meant so much more
To me.
I cry myself to sleep
When I awake I feel the pain
From way down deep
My heart is broken
My resolve so weak
What good is tomorrow
When I feel so meek.
Without my father
Why the hell even bother
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JamesStockdale
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2016-10-20 08:51:45]
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Re: Just Today
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Thursday, 20th October 2016 @ 12:38:39 PM AEST
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wow what a short sweet poem.
well put together my friend.rc. |
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Re: Just Today
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st October 2016 @ 01:53:34 AM AEST
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"Without my father
Why the hell even bother "
Because he would want you to.
I wholeheartedly can relate to this very emotive poem. I know these feelings all too well, unfortunately.
Keepa writin/'/ buddy. :)
Tim |
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Re: Just Today
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by unknown_utopia on
Friday, 21st October 2016 @ 03:34:01 PM AEST
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short and to the point,
hopefully like myself
you are just good at writing bout pain
and not reliving it.
well done..... |
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Re: Just Today
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 14th November 2016 @ 10:04:02 AM AEST
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Hang in there.
Sad, emotive write, but it is good to let it out and not let it defeat you.
The answer is in your title- just today.
~Scorp |
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