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Negative Satellite She
Contributed by
duff
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Friday, 21st October 2016 @ 08:41:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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Moved out east coast hello
I/'/m always here forever cool
Wind caught Mondays blues
Toes negative dangle me ya
Beach salt my new swallow
Writing in a sands mystery
Shells trying to wave mellow
I only lied just to swim home
My clothes the only memory
These castles not temporary
Copyright ©
duff
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2016-10-21 20:41:03]
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Re: Negative Satellite She
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 23rd October 2016 @ 01:15:44 AM AEST
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I really like this a lot, for it/'/s captivating and reminds me of a poem I read earlier today entitled conch, I read it in the latest New Yorker edition, so what is human, it sort of suggests, and how life itself might not survive too long
on the high seas, and yet, and I paraphrase from the poem entitled, "conch", the wooden ship that does not live
can last.
Excellent Poem you wrote Duff!
Where do we go
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Re: Negative Satellite She
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 18th December 2016 @ 12:39:33 PM AEST
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This leaves me feeling sad...Winds of change and all of that. The last two lines are haunting. Well done.
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