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Swamp Liqour
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Sunday, 23rd October 2016 @ 12:59:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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I was in a car crash
or was it the war
it does not matter
when I hear a loud noise
I still hit the floor,
I can not sleep
the confusion is deep
I moan and sigh
and stay awake all night.
Sometimes I think I am upside down
as swamp liquor flows
Inner-visions
melt on the walls in my mind,
corrosion cracks
and lightning strikes
I shake and shiver
on this endless night.
Burning with confusion
I just stumble around
so deep undercover
I do not even know who I am now,
I am quite annoyed
because to many times
I find myself
giggling
lying face down on the ground.
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unknown_utopia
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2016-10-23 00:59:46]
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Re: Swamp Liqour
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Sunday, 23rd October 2016 @ 02:39:12 AM AEST
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wow!!!
best to you sir!
they all drive crazy
you know :(
I think this is not magnificently perfectly
written. Truth burns through your poetry man!
Peace! |
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Re: Swamp Liqour
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by duff on
Tuesday, 1st November 2016 @ 06:15:44 PM AEST
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| This screams psychedelic and Altered States all day long. Images melting the wall and frying the brain. Personalities searching for the truth and reality. This is great. |
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Re: Swamp Liqour
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 1st January 2017 @ 07:30:20 PM AEST
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Great job writing this. Wow.
It is told in such a matter of fact way that the reader could almost be lulled into glossing over the serious nature behind your words.
Well done.
~Scorp |
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