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Corruption
Contributed by
Senates
on
Wednesday, 26th October 2016 @ 08:58:45 AM in AEST
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Shadow/'/s shine surely,
Silhouettes glittered gold,
Strings severed silently,
Truth bends now folds,
Blinding souls shamefully,
Beautifully baleful mold,
Mocking mindful malice,
As if secrets shall never be told.
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Senates
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2016-10-26 08:58:45]
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Re: Corruption
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by The_Callif on
Thursday, 27th October 2016 @ 01:55:08 PM AEST
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| What amazing imagery and alliteration... |
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Re: Corruption
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by duff on
Saturday, 29th October 2016 @ 04:32:01 PM AEST
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| I like the title and the mysteriousness of this write. The darkness element is on blast. Writing up for interpretation is so intriguing and you have opened up avenues here to be explored. |
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Re: Corruption
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 29th October 2016 @ 07:56:49 PM AEST
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this drizzles within a deep soulful
truth. It is with elaborate simplicity
you remind us of so much.
It is wonderful.
Great Poem!
Peace! |
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Re: Corruption
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by ingeniusidiot on
Tuesday, 29th November 2016 @ 10:50:39 AM AEST
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You speak volumes with just a few words. The whole piece flows so well that it is difficult to choose a favorite line. Great write and keep up the great work.
Rich |
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Re: Corruption
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Tuesday, 20th December 2016 @ 01:39:24 PM AEST
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Makes me wonder who the inspiration was.
The line
"Strings severed silently"
really sticks in my mind as being quite menacing.
Nice write , not a word wasted.
Steve |
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