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Ritual
Contributed by
duff
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Wednesday, 26th October 2016 @ 07:21:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Fountains mood a raging dragon
Breathing fire into windows weep
Warm absinthe dripping scrolls fall
The quill bloodied again for battle
Letters bend spells scenic carnage
Drowsy lantern driving woes hand
As skeletons scrape frigid ground
Fast approaching the black tower
Coiled swords walk Ophidia march
Dark earth shaking beneath them
Armored horses cross the red river
Finality chamber temples powder
The lone moon pinches the candle
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2016-10-26 19:21:19]
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Re: Ritual
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 14th November 2016 @ 09:59:15 AM AEST
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Very wordy, therefore really visual. I like the imagery, even if the full picture remains intriguingly elusive.
//"Breathing fire into windows weep"...//
Cool line!
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Re: Ritual
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by JamesStockdale on
Sunday, 19th March 2017 @ 06:25:40 PM AEST
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Great poem. Came off as medieval to me.
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