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Midnight
Contributed by
duff
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Thursday, 27th October 2016 @ 07:50:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Dancing in the dark room
It/'/s approaching midnight
Lights flashing all around
Eyes are meeting no one
Skirt stumbles in the dim
Strobe light captured how
Lips sweat tonight/'/s wine
Cigarettes a burning light
Friends aren/'/t looking out
She/'/s an angel leaving now
Copyright ©
duff
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2016-10-27 19:50:38]
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Re: Midnight
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 29th October 2016 @ 08:06:41 PM AEST
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this is very good. I like it a lot, just the way
it reads like deep thoughts left a creative
wake from the smooth waters edge.
Peace! |
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Re: Midnight
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by thezenmonkey on
Sunday, 30th October 2016 @ 08:16:56 AM AEST
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| Love it |
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Re: Midnight
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by Voice of the Silent on
Sunday, 30th October 2016 @ 06:23:58 PM AEST
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Sounds dangerous living after midnight, I liked this like a story dark story indeed. Good vibes to you friend.
hope to read more soon
-voice |
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Re: Midnight
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by ingeniusidiot on
Friday, 18th November 2016 @ 09:44:46 AM AEST
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Interesting piece. One can imagine themselves in a night club dancing with someone knowing not where the rest of the night may lead. Great write.
Rich |
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Re: Midnight
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by akadawny on
Saturday, 19th November 2016 @ 02:43:22 PM AEST
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| Like the imagery and creative detail, nice poem :) |
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Re: Midnight
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 18th December 2016 @ 12:35:23 PM AEST
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I don/'/t miss times like this...Great cautionary tale.
~Scorp |
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