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Just Take me Away
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
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Sunday, 30th October 2016 @ 06:27:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Just take me away
Put me in your pocket
Take me out when you need me
But until then let me be
Let me sleep these decades away
How I wish I could just stay comatose
Dreaming my daydream of wonders
It/'/s all better then reality,
it/'/s all better when I don/'/t have to be me
But if you need me
Here I/'/ll be with your loose change
Dreaming my deranged daydreams
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Voice of the Silent
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2016-10-30 18:27:03]
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Re: Just Take me Away
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by duff on
Tuesday, 1st November 2016 @ 11:46:02 AM AEST
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| I think most people can relate to this. I know I can. Sometimes reality is just too much and solitude and escape sound a much better option. The quiet time with only your thoughts to deal with. A lot less complicated. Well done |
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Re: Just Take me Away
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by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 1st November 2016 @ 12:01:29 PM AEST
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If you have ever been under the spell of depression that is how you feel. You may wake up 5 to 10 years later and realize you have wasted many years of your life you can never get back. We need to be careful what we wish for. A great write!!!!
James |
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Re: Just Take me Away
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by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 5th November 2016 @ 11:54:33 PM AEST
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it is so true what james said
good poem
thanx for sharing. |
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