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Until there was you
Contributed by
FireStarter
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Sunday, 30th October 2016 @ 11:43:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Was in the dark
all alone
No light inside
No where to go
Until I met you
I thought I was one
You showed me your world,
brightened it with the sun
The darkness went away
so did my fears
Little did I know,
I would cherish you throughout the years
The darkness inside
was no match for the light
You showed me the way, and
brightened up my night
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2016-10-30 23:43:07]
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Re: Until there was you
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by duff on
Tuesday, 1st November 2016 @ 05:19:04 PM AEST
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| Darkness and the allowance of light. A partnership never giving all the way but a compromise. It was cool how you captured the relationship. |
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Re: Until there was you
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Thursday, 24th November 2016 @ 11:33:18 AM AEST
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well written and express how one feel,
untell someone entered thre life and everything changes.excellent written and express one/'/s true feeling. |
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