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Wild Card
Contributed by
duff
on
Tuesday, 1st November 2016 @ 07:29:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Childhood coffee black
Loyal sisters and scars
Raised by lullaby smack
Taught joker play cards
Broken face grown beat
Bourbon doll her name
Bare chest hotel retreat
The queen says go king
Shots later naked escape
Cackling below the street
Police cruise puddles tire
Alleyway eyes barrel fate
A cobble lamp humidifier
Better button your game
Copyright ©
duff
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2016-11-01 19:29:28]
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Re: Wild Card
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by ming on
Tuesday, 1st November 2016 @ 08:17:47 PM AEST
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So many cool lines here! Examples; lullaby smack, bourbon doll, naked escape, alleyway eyes and button your game. Obviously I dig this.
ming |
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Re: Wild Card
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by The_Callif on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2016 @ 11:24:12 AM AEST
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I absolutely love the flow of this poem
"Alleyway eyes barrel fate"
so much emotion wrapped up in these lines... |
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Re: Wild Card
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by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 3rd November 2016 @ 12:47:49 PM AEST
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This was very unique.
I really enjoyed this.
James |
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Re: Wild Card
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by Voice of the Silent on
Saturday, 5th November 2016 @ 01:55:57 AM AEST
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DIfferent from anything I"ve read, unique. hope to see more of that unique style
-voice |
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Re: Wild Card
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by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 5th November 2016 @ 11:39:19 PM AEST
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So kool
the way this flowed
good stuff...... |
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Re: Wild Card
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 6th November 2016 @ 11:32:09 AM AEST
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From the title to the final line- love it. Smile-inducing.
Thanks for sharing!
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Re: Wild Card
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by shereal_14 on
Friday, 11th November 2016 @ 08:06:46 PM AEST
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| Amazing!!! |
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Re: Wild Card
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by ingeniusidiot on
Monday, 28th November 2016 @ 11:16:57 AM AEST
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i have to agree this is very unique. Ive always enjoyed reading your work. Im glad i was finally able to come back here.
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