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Madness
Contributed by
lilblkcat
on
Wednesday, 9th November 2016 @ 05:52:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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Cut so deep
Blood runs thick
Splatters on the floor
Dries so quick
Crimson red
Flows like a river
Body relaxes
Spine gets a quiver
Relief is there
The blade has been kind
Tilt my head, laugh
And lose my mind
Dip my finger in
Swirl it around
Draw a pretty picture
My emotions have been found
Red red red
Everywhere I see
Maybe I cut too deep
Or maybe it/'/s finally set me free.
Copyright ©
lilblkcat
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2016-11-09 17:52:35]
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Re: Madness
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by duff on
Thursday, 10th November 2016 @ 06:27:23 PM AEST
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| Very intense and never the answer. But i do hope writing can be that release. A painful write but brave for sharing. You can always find friends here |
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Re: Madness
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by JamesStockdale on
Friday, 11th November 2016 @ 10:26:49 AM AEST
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What duff said........
This to me was real poetry, something I don/'/t do much.
Very unique. Great write!
James |
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Re: Madness
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by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 12th November 2016 @ 06:10:30 PM AEST
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The release of the emotional torture...
well done
I like the way this flows. |
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Re: Madness
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 12th November 2016 @ 08:45:55 PM AEST
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Disquieting. Cringe worthy ending. Well done!
~Scorp |
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Re: Madness
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by Angelgirl365 on
Friday, 9th June 2017 @ 11:48:32 PM AEST
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Hit the emotions in the face with this one poem; and I felt all of it with you.
Great write |
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