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Give Me Broken
Contributed by
invierno
on
Monday, 14th November 2016 @ 11:58:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Flaking paint
To
Marble walls,
Creaky steps
To
Echoes fall,
Clicking switch
To
Dialed lulls;
Memories sigh
in
Wrinkled crawl;
Worn, the grin at new,
the Null.
Copyright ©
invierno
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2016-11-14 11:58:39]
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Re: Give Me Broken
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 14th November 2016 @ 03:35:01 PM AEST
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You chose your words wisely. Well done.
Nice to see you posting again!
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Re: Give Me Broken
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by softerware on
Monday, 14th November 2016 @ 09:22:55 PM AEST
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To say much in few words is a talent few have! You had my interest at the first two lines, so opposed. What could flaking paint and marble walls have in common I wonder?
To your introduction (food for thought!) ..Do we not all like to think of ourselves as bright and shiny new...when in fact we are just young and callow?
For all our brave new worldlism ..we wander helpless when the power goes out.
If you would know yourself:let there be dark!! softerware |
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Re: Give Me Broken
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by ming on
Tuesday, 15th November 2016 @ 09:24:50 AM AEST
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This is so thought provoking that I have read it numerous times.
ming |
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Re: Give Me Broken
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by duff on
Wednesday, 16th November 2016 @ 06:33:33 AM AEST
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| Short and compact with so much to read into. Awesome imagery and just very well written from start to finish. Great execution. |
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