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The Laughter of Shoeless Feet
Contributed by
invierno
on
Saturday, 19th November 2016 @ 09:00:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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These feet,
Nary a peep,
Without fail,
bend leather
every time the same.
I thought this house mine.
This unsought consistency,
I now know,
Even though I hold the deed,
Points unerring
that the architect owns me.
Even shoes and shirts
obediently offer but
a left, a right;
choices,
therefore,
the stuff of laughter,
promenade
bare as shoeless feet.
Copyright ©
invierno
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2016-11-19 09:00:48]
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Re: The Laughter of Shoeless Feet
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by RussellReinhardt on
Saturday, 19th November 2016 @ 11:04:59 AM AEST
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Hello my brother
First let me say its so nice to read you again.
Yes in life there is so much we do that is not our plan, although we may think it is. We are cunningly lead into believing its what we want, and we believe, just to find our self trapped. Your poem so gently points this out to us, but will we learn from this? I pray we do. Beautiful write, God bless you.
Greetings
Rus
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Re: The Laughter of Shoeless Feet
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Saturday, 19th November 2016 @ 01:01:20 PM AEST
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I love the analogy. You gave me a new perspective.
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Re: The Laughter of Shoeless Feet
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by ming on
Saturday, 19th November 2016 @ 08:47:34 PM AEST
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This is amazing. Your third eye opens. Thanks for sharing this spiritual piece.
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Re: The Laughter of Shoeless Feet
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by irisblue on
Saturday, 19th November 2016 @ 09:09:45 PM AEST
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| Beautiful Michael! |
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Re: The Laughter of Shoeless Feet
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by softerware on
Sunday, 20th November 2016 @ 08:50:21 PM AEST
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A wanderers lament! We are limited by our surroundings, and they are designed by others!
I wonder if we could cope without boundaries?
If our surroundings endlessly morphed to our every movement, where would our core existence reside?
Do we not rely on the drape we can draw; the door we can lock? No longer forest dwellers who live off the land...we panic if the power goes out!
A sweet lament with wise intent..
Freedom is as freedoms spent..
Set us free and we retreat;
scared and bare as shoeless feet!
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