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In The Kitchen
Contributed by
Beyfoxman5
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Saturday, 19th November 2016 @ 12:55:36 PM in AEST
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It/'/s where I collect my thoughts and dispell them
A fork a knife a spoon, well then
Thoughts, ideas, dreams-here, they get a kickin
Coming straight at you, in the kitchen
Tile floors
And a sheet of smores
A salad plate
Sleep or a run? The great debate
A place of forgotten promises and broken diets
Away from the noise, here is quiet
It plays what I want on the radio
I/'/ve never sat here and said, man I want to go
A place of comfort food
And good and bad moods
Thoughts, ideas, here- they get kickin/'/
Coming straight at you, in the kitchen
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Re: In The Kitchen
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by Invierno on
Sunday, 20th November 2016 @ 11:23:30 AM AEST
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Nice nail on a nuance. Love the verbiaqe. Cool poems!
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Re: In The Kitchen
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by softerware on
Sunday, 20th November 2016 @ 08:40:33 PM AEST
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There is joy and mischief in your write! The hatchery of thoughts is the heart of the home...the kitchen.
My favorite line is
tile floors and a sheet of smores!
Takes me back to mama baking cookies and pies.
Now we order in.
Gone are the thoughts that might have been.
softer ware |
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Re: In The Kitchen
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by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2016 @ 04:53:04 PM AEST
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I wondered where you were fox?
Great write. This was so crisp and clean that I could read it fast and the flow was awesome.
James |
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Re: In The Kitchen
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 25th November 2016 @ 07:52:27 PM AEST
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Plus the coffeemaker is in there! ;)
This lightened the mood. Thank you for the smile.
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Re: In The Kitchen
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 26th November 2016 @ 12:09:31 AM AEST
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so much so
wonderfully put!
me the kid learned to cook
from my mom who worked,
I had no dad around.
I remember going to the grocery
for me was quality time with
my mom, and then we two would cook.
I love to cook, and I love to shop at
the grocery still, I do say, what could
be grander, in the grocery, using your
best knowledge of all this grand foodstuff
and picking it up, should I buy it what will
I make of it, I don/'/t want to waste any of it,
the economy of it, the dropping it into a basket
on wheels, and then bagging it yourself
helping the clerk who knows you by now.
then, poetry or song on the radio while you
cook, the pot of soup bubbling over,
you learned by now to keep the lid off
allowing the smell to fill the house
the perfect simmering of all that
is good, the staple shared
with bread and decent wine
how lucky could you get
in the kitchen with your
mind that knows the secret
great at soup or a quick altogether
breakfast timing / does not matter
how many people / what we got
I can make a run
but I never will forget how
much of a luxury it is
because I grew up on the poor
side of town.
excellent verse -
"A fork a knife a spoon, well than"
you got that so right man!
Peace! |
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