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attention
Contributed by
Gloomyblu
on
Friday, 25th November 2016 @ 05:54:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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the cold comes in through my windows.
it enters even if they are closed.
how long has it been coming through?
i/'/m only noticing it now.
the lonely comes in through my skin.
it enters from where you used to be.
how long has it been coming through?
i/'/m only noticing it now.
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Gloomyblu
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2016-11-25 17:54:28]
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Re: attention
(User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 25th November 2016 @ 07:07:16 PM AEST
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This is an interesting and wholly inventive way of expressing feelings towards someone.
Your longing came alive. This is a great poem.
Well done.
~Scorp
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Re: attention
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 26th November 2016 @ 01:46:38 AM AEST
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extremely well done!
great job!!!
Peace! |
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Re: attention
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by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 26th November 2016 @ 07:16:16 AM AEST
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good poem
keep writing.... |
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