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Shattered
Contributed by
akadawny
on
Sunday, 27th November 2016 @ 03:16:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Shattered, empty, dark inside
Cold, dark, no place to hide
Whispers, murmurs, fill my head
Confusion blindly leading dread
Desperate pleadings, torn apart
No way out, no place to start
Echos bounding, drowning walls
Roaring as the madness calls
Lost in darkness, where is here
Tense emotions, seething fear
Silence as the veil descends
All is clear as the shadow bends
Abrupt as nothing the mist dissolves
Gliding as the calm evolves
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2016-11-27 15:16:56]
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Re: Shattered
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by ingeniusidiot on
Monday, 28th November 2016 @ 05:57:22 AM AEST
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Beautifully written. Your imagery draws the reader in and keeps them there. Keep up the great work.
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Re: Shattered
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by duff on
Thursday, 1st December 2016 @ 08:30:02 AM AEST
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Very intriguing indeed. You take the reader on a journey with some nice lines here.
"Silence as the veil descends". Just one example. Well done.
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Re: Shattered
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by JamesStockdale on
Friday, 2nd December 2016 @ 04:48:24 PM AEST
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Beautifully written with an awesome flow.
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