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comma
Contributed by
ming
on
Monday, 28th November 2016 @ 12:06:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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that place
you breathe
or think
or watch
unheard
words
slide to
the floor
and roll
to
empty
corners.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2016-11-28 12:06:28]
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Re: comma
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by ingeniusidiot on
Monday, 28th November 2016 @ 12:37:54 PM AEST
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interesting piece, something i will have to read a few more times. Good work
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Re: comma
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by duff on
Monday, 28th November 2016 @ 01:27:46 PM AEST
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A compact piece that/'/s always accompanied by your touch. I think we all have a place we retreat to that allows us to be creative. Well done my friend.
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Re: comma
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 29th November 2016 @ 07:15:31 PM AEST
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I like this one a lot. Great expression! Love it.
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Re: comma
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by softerware on
Thursday, 1st December 2016 @ 07:27:37 PM AEST
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Elegant in its simplicity. You write like Picasso painted. Just enough lines to form an image, and too few to define the content, leaving the observer to imagine the rest of the work of art.
A thousand will read this, and see a thousand different meanings, and that is the beauty of your skillful condensation.
It amuses me to think that your skills could rewrite WIKOPEDIA in 10 pages and leave nothing overlooked.
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