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Diary of a Madwoman
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Wednesday, 30th November 2016 @ 12:47:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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In triple layered scorn
The pullback is warm
Indulgence is born
Advanced in its form
Bristled irony adorns
Mawkish vultures swarm
Blaring high-pitched horns
Cutting clear through the storm
Arriving crocodile teared worn
Voided backbone conform
Perplexed complex shorn
Resistant to transform
Allegiance is torn
Maladjustment the new norm
Possessed children of the corn
Sinking on quicksand platforms
Brimming with angst and forlorn
Lines memorized to perform
Suited up to mourn
Stand-in reform.
Thank you to all the jaw-dropping talent on YPDC- past and present- for all the inspiration.
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hauntedscorp
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2016-11-30 00:47:38]
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Re: Diary of a Madwoman
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by duff on
Wednesday, 30th November 2016 @ 08:45:04 AM AEST
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I like it my friend. Short lines seething with /*****/ off attitude. The way it reads and the pace of it is great as well. Awesome job.
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Re: Diary of a Madwoman
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 30th November 2016 @ 03:04:05 PM AEST
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Pffft! To anyone reading this, I highly recommend all 200 hauntedscorp poems!!! They are definitely Scorpendous & Scorperrific!!!!
Gad, this one was like a nightmare. Please let me wake up...now!!!!
The madwoman is probably married to Freddy Kruger! :p |
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Re: Diary of a Madwoman
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by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 30th November 2016 @ 04:30:37 PM AEST
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This was great. Rapid fire as well. I think I/'/ll read some of those old poems.
James
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Re: Diary of a Madwoman
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by softerware on
Thursday, 1st December 2016 @ 07:08:10 PM AEST
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Spoken like a Gattling gun; rows and rows of piercing projectiles embedding themselves in a tidy cadence of sheer insanity!
Me thinks you have created a new poetry form here! Start to finish rhyme!
You are truly an explorer of words, and thank YOU for the inspiration. You are proof that venturing outside the conventional is creation itself.
I salute your 200th poem.
softer ware
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Re: Diary of a Madwoman
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by GloomyBlu on
Saturday, 3rd December 2016 @ 11:49:12 AM AEST
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| What does the rhyming do for you? How does the flow of your words assist with the flow of your thoughts? |
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Re: Diary of a Madwoman
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Tuesday, 20th December 2016 @ 01:51:11 PM AEST
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I would only say mad in the sense that you cannot see your obvious talent in the same way that others can.
200 is an achievement in itself, 200 worth reading certainly is.
You thank all the "jaw dropping talent " here, in turn those of us who have been jaw dropped by yourself would like to thank you also.
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Re: Diary of a Madwoman
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by alicewhite on
Friday, 26th May 2017 @ 02:51:36 PM AEST
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| Children of the corn , excellent reference, us freaks of poetry , different breed indeed , n you show us exactly why different is desirable here with this blue print of excellence here xxx |
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Re: Diary of a Madwoman
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th August 2020 @ 09:56:00 AM AEST
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//"Allegiance is torn
Maladjustment the new norm"
I still find this poem jaw dropping.
Robin: Holy sinking on quicksand, Batman!
Batman: Wha?
Robin: Holy sinking on quicksand, Batman! Quicksand, sinking, we`re sinking!!!
Batman: Uh...oh crap!!!
Now you see Superman would have been smart enough to never go near that quicksand platform thingy muh a bob.
What`s that got to do with Diary of a Madwoman. Nuttin` honey but Superman doesn`t need gadgets and is just plain more cool than Berpman. 😋 Still got nuttin` to do with this impressive poem. I just need to TIMgent. Speaking of a gent, that`s me. TIMgent. 😇😎
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