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A Girl Named Hope
Contributed by
pat346
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Wednesday, 30th November 2016 @ 03:35:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Hello out there
Can you hear me now?
Am I coming in clear?
I//'//ve worn my voice down
trying to find out
if anyone is here
It feels so nice to know you//'//re on my side
and by my side for this long ride through the night
A year ago I felt like a bomb about to explode
But you defused me now I know it will be alright
with you by my side
Hello to you
And to everything you do
You know that I love you
I//'//ve been so lost
You are my flashlight in my dark
in the flood you are my ark
It feels so nice to know you//'//re on my side
and by my side for this long ride through the night
A year ago I felt like a bomb about to explode
But you defused me now I know it will be alright
with you by my side
Hello out there
Can you hear me now?
I don//'//t know what I//'//d do
Without
Without you.
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Re: A Girl Named Hope
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by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 30th November 2016 @ 05:02:46 PM AEST
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A very emotional write.
Very expressive and well executed.
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Re: A Girl Named Hope
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by FireStarter on
Wednesday, 30th November 2016 @ 06:31:11 PM AEST
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| My boyfriend makes me feel like this. Extremely passionate. |
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Re: A Girl Named Hope
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by GloomyBlu on
Saturday, 3rd December 2016 @ 11:44:05 AM AEST
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| Perhaps this would go well with music. |
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