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Gargoyle
Contributed by
dvtpdw
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Thursday, 1st December 2016 @ 01:55:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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As the years spin by so does times/'/ change
Taking what/'/s formed as it tries to rearrange
Internally there/'/s a shield it can/'/t penetrate
Outside is where it chooses to obliterate
At the start visions contain all the suspense
Marching past the ages with building intense
Present struggles to finish what a future reveals
Proving nary one path permanently sets and seals
Each moment provides mason for a stony exterior
Protecting beauty within a dream filled interior
What/'/s present on the outside can never compare
To what the inner self has yet to begin to share
Perched here high upon times/'/ narrow ledge
The heart beats strong releasing this pledge
No matter how you may view this gargoyle/'/s face
The person inside is worth life/'/s sweet gentle grace
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dvtpdw
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2016-12-01 13:55:27]
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Re: Gargoyle
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by softerware on
Thursday, 1st December 2016 @ 07:13:33 PM AEST
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Never judge a gargoyle by its cover!
Clever, fun, and revealing a truth about the author:
Whats present on the outside can never compare
to what the inner self has yet to begin to share.
I hear with hope a promise of more to come from you of the dream filled interior!
Dreams in sunlight turn to dust,
but write, create, and dream we must!
softerware |
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Re: Gargoyle
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by pooper on
Friday, 2nd December 2016 @ 05:09:47 PM AEST
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| Strongly put and invites interpetation. I enjoyed...thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Gargoyle
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Saturday, 3rd December 2016 @ 06:26:53 PM AEST
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Humanity, its fickle perception of materialistic view.
Rather then the touch of our spoirituality in embrace.
Our inner glow, and how can we show it? |
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Re: Gargoyle
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd December 2016 @ 10:58:56 PM AEST
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wow, some faces show emotion
others do not
inside sometimes no one
can really tell
just by looking at a face passing
by
without asking questions
saying hello, hello, hello in there
even to ones self once in a while.
you know I loved Victor Hugo/'/s,
"the hunchback of notre dame",
and the movie with charles laughton
as Quasimodo -
And then, how Esmeralda
is saved by Quasimodo
amid the magnificent Gargoyle
Peace!
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Re: Gargoyle
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 4th December 2016 @ 05:28:02 PM AEST
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Well done. I like your use of symbolism and imagery.
~Scorp |
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