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Dibs
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
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Sunday, 4th December 2016 @ 09:31:13 AM in AEST
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I just wanna call you mine
If only for you to lay here at my side
It comforts me to know
That even if only for a time
I have somewhere to go
Where my words aren/'/t lost
Where someone sees me
For who I/'/m trying to be
Where my hearts not a cold frost
Used to be down and blue
But now you/'/ve got me burning hot
Only for you I/'/ll be baloo
If only for a time
I/'/d call you mine
Not to own just to hold
To keep from going cold
I wanna call dibs
For you I/'/ll be baloo
Cause now I don/'/t have to be blue
No more
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Voice of the Silent
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2016-12-04 09:31:13]
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Re: Dibs
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 4th December 2016 @ 05:23:10 PM AEST
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This is a sweet and unconventional love poem.
I enjoyed it. Thank you for posting.
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Re: Dibs
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by duff on
Wednesday, 7th December 2016 @ 07:58:42 PM AEST
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If only we could put a stamp on our insecurities but we can/'/t. That makes the journey. The challenges of personal confrontation. Meeting our angels, seeing our demons. I love the title. Well done.
Some try to claim but eventually fail. Property is temporary
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