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Under the Vaulted Sky
Contributed by
Brasco
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Sunday, 4th December 2016 @ 11:39:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Under the vaulted sky
The grass below, my soul, and I
For no one knows the inner workings there
My heart exposed, laid bare
How oft they mock and stare
Yet know not what they see
For only I truly understand what is me
And the painted vail beyond my gaze
The sun set high in morning blaze
Soak my soul with warming rays
Humbled now and always
Copyright ©
Brasco
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2016-12-04 11:39:30]
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Re: Under the Vaulted Sky
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by JamesStockdale on
Sunday, 4th December 2016 @ 04:56:25 PM AEST
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Great poem. We write a bit alike.
I enjoyed it!
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Re: Under the Vaulted Sky
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 4th December 2016 @ 05:03:45 PM AEST
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//And the painted veil beyond my gaze
The sun set high in morning blaze
Soak my soul with warming rays//
Beautiful lines! Welcome back.
It looks like you haven/'/t popped in for awhile.
~Scorp |
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Re: Under the Vaulted Sky
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by softerware on
Thursday, 15th December 2016 @ 01:09:12 PM AEST
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Beautiful words choreographed like a ballet! You are correct; no one knows us as well as we do!
It begs the question: How much do we want others to know about us? Let us be careful what we ask for!
Perhaps in some cases, it is to our advantage that others --know not what they see--!
I especially love the last two lines; a fitting closure to a thoughtful observation from the inside outward. softerware
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